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Author: | knee tunes [ Fri August 02, 2013 5:23 am ] |
Post subject: | Haiku Baiku |
I dug a coo noo until there was digestion of all I used to |
Author: | Sgt. Crackpot [ Fri August 02, 2013 5:26 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Haiku Baiku |
Author: | Sgt. Crackpot [ Fri August 02, 2013 5:45 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Haiku Baiku |
I know the whole 5, 7, 5, thing but I usually have trouble with the right kireji. So here goes: Forum of the web Together by band and music Red Mosquito - kin |
Author: | BurtReynolds [ Fri August 02, 2013 5:46 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Haiku Baiku |
Sgt. Crackpot wrote: I know the whole 5, 7, 5, thing but I usually have trouble with the right kireji. So here goes: Forum of the web Together by band and music Red Mosquito - kin Its really more of a guideline. |
Author: | Sgt. Crackpot [ Fri August 02, 2013 5:48 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Haiku Baiku |
BurtReynolds wrote: Its really more of a guideline. Which part? The 5,7,5 thing or the kireji? |
Author: | BurtReynolds [ Fri August 02, 2013 5:50 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Haiku Baiku |
Sgt. Crackpot wrote: BurtReynolds wrote: Its really more of a guideline. Which part? The 5,7,5 thing or the kireji? the 5,7,5 thing. Maybe both. |
Author: | Sgt. Crackpot [ Fri August 02, 2013 5:53 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Haiku Baiku |
BurtReynolds wrote: Sgt. Crackpot wrote: BurtReynolds wrote: Its really more of a guideline. Which part? The 5,7,5 thing or the kireji? the 5,7,5 thing. Maybe both. OK, thanks. I guess I just like it more if it fits perfectly, without detracting from the thought/message that's intended, it's probably an anal retentiveness thing. But it's good to know that there's some flexibility. |
Author: | knee tunes [ Fri August 02, 2013 6:01 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Haiku Baiku |
if its about deer or anything in nature the gods will pat ass |
Author: | Sgt. Crackpot [ Fri August 02, 2013 6:02 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Haiku Baiku |
knee tunes wrote: if its about deer or anything in nature the gods will pat ass I love the twist at the end. |
Author: | Norris [ Fri August 02, 2013 7:14 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Haiku Baiku |
street lights on the glass cascading out forever what's on the menu? |
Author: | Sgt. Crackpot [ Fri August 02, 2013 7:54 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Haiku Baiku |
No need compromise Harmony in the marriage Half and half pizza |
Author: | Sgt. Crackpot [ Fri August 02, 2013 8:45 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Haiku Baiku |
Agony of hell Cut too close with rusty blade Ingrown pubic hair |
Author: | harmless [ Fri August 02, 2013 8:55 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Haiku Baiku |
5,7,5 was invented for English haiku as it was thought to approximate Japanese syllable lengths. But it turns out they are so variable, and generally much longer, that there's a lot of debate about it and quite a bit of flexibility; I know a lot of translated haiku isn't in 5,7,5. Some poets think 3,4,3 would be more accurate, technically. |
Author: | Sgt. Crackpot [ Fri August 02, 2013 10:30 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Haiku Baiku |
Poet and scholar Expert on percussion all Awesome our Harmless |
Author: | Norris [ Fri August 02, 2013 5:19 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Haiku Baiku |
rolling down the street smoking indo, sipping on gin and juice. laid back. |
Author: | washing machine [ Fri August 02, 2013 6:33 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Haiku Baiku |
Banana leaves wave Graffiti guys spray our names Life in the jungle |
Author: | Sgt. Crackpot [ Sat August 03, 2013 7:35 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Haiku Baiku |
Money greedy all Rob me take all I have plus more Fuck you auto shops |
Author: | Sgt. Crackpot [ Mon August 05, 2013 11:12 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Haiku Baiku |
We begin again Never welcomed, always loathed Fuck yourself Monday |
Author: | knee tunes [ Tue August 06, 2013 3:58 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Haiku Baiku |
surface the north wrote: Banana leaves wave Graffiti guys spray our names Life in the jungle |
Author: | Norris [ Tue August 06, 2013 6:15 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Haiku Baiku |
I surfaced the north when my pen wasn't writing. I'm in hiding, yeah. |
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