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Fri August 02, 2013 5:23 am
I dug a coo noo
until there was digestion
of all I used to
Fri August 02, 2013 5:26 am
Fri August 02, 2013 5:45 am
I know the whole 5, 7, 5, thing but I usually have trouble with the right kireji. So here goes:
Forum of the web
Together by band and music
Red Mosquito - kin
Fri August 02, 2013 5:46 am
Sgt. Crackpot wrote:I know the whole 5, 7, 5, thing but I usually have trouble with the right kireji. So here goes:
Forum of the web
Together by band and music
Red Mosquito - kin
Its really more of a guideline.
Fri August 02, 2013 5:48 am
BurtReynolds wrote:Its really more of a guideline.
Which part? The 5,7,5 thing or the kireji?
Fri August 02, 2013 5:50 am
Sgt. Crackpot wrote:BurtReynolds wrote:Its really more of a guideline.
Which part? The 5,7,5 thing or the kireji?
the 5,7,5 thing. Maybe both.
Fri August 02, 2013 5:53 am
BurtReynolds wrote:Sgt. Crackpot wrote:BurtReynolds wrote:Its really more of a guideline.
Which part? The 5,7,5 thing or the kireji?
the 5,7,5 thing. Maybe both.
OK, thanks. I guess I just like it more if it fits perfectly, without detracting from the thought/message that's intended, it's probably an anal retentiveness thing. But it's good to know that there's some flexibility.
Fri August 02, 2013 6:01 am
if its about deer
or anything in nature
the gods will pat ass
Fri August 02, 2013 6:02 am
knee tunes wrote:if its about deer
or anything in nature
the gods will pat ass
I love the twist at the end.
Fri August 02, 2013 7:14 am
street lights on the glass
cascading out forever
what's on the menu?
Fri August 02, 2013 7:54 am
No need compromise
Harmony in the marriage
Half and half pizza
Fri August 02, 2013 8:45 am
Agony of hell
Cut too close with rusty blade
Ingrown pubic hair
Fri August 02, 2013 8:55 am
5,7,5 was invented for English haiku as it was thought to approximate Japanese syllable lengths. But it turns out they are so variable, and generally much longer, that there's a lot of debate about it and quite a bit of flexibility; I know a lot of translated haiku isn't in 5,7,5. Some poets think 3,4,3 would be more accurate, technically.
Fri August 02, 2013 10:30 am
Poet and scholar
Expert on percussion all
Awesome our Harmless
Fri August 02, 2013 5:19 pm
rolling down the street
smoking indo, sipping on
gin and juice. laid back.
Fri August 02, 2013 6:33 pm
Banana leaves wave
Graffiti guys spray our names
Life in the jungle
Sat August 03, 2013 7:35 am
Money greedy all
Rob me take all I have plus more
Fuck you auto shops
Mon August 05, 2013 11:12 am
We begin again
Never welcomed, always loathed
Fuck yourself Monday
Tue August 06, 2013 3:58 pm
surface the north wrote:Banana leaves wave
Graffiti guys spray our names
Life in the jungle
Tue August 06, 2013 6:15 pm
I surfaced the north
when my pen wasn't writing.
I'm in hiding, yeah.
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