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Hilarious Comedy Sketch

Tue January 15, 2019 2:52 am

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Wed January 16, 2019 1:15 am

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Thu January 17, 2019 5:50 pm

Very subpar acting, camerawork, writing, etc...

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Thu January 17, 2019 10:31 pm

tree_ wrote:Very subpar acting, camerawork, writing, etc...

both of them? argo loves the one i posted

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Fri January 18, 2019 2:44 am

Both bad but first ones worse

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Fri January 18, 2019 2:54 am

tree_ wrote:Both bad but first ones worse

what do we do now?

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Fri January 18, 2019 3:08 am

Teach comedy. Loud and fast!

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Fri January 18, 2019 3:17 am

tree_ wrote:Teach comedy. Loud and fast!

i watched the first one again...so bad

i'm not sure i could do better though

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Fri January 18, 2019 3:21 am

Loud and fast masks poor material. Look at Friends and every other shitty sitcom ever.

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Fri January 18, 2019 10:20 am

i dunno, i think my skit is better than that second one. it has one joke that it retells over and over and has a predictable punchline. i find unpredictable or unexpected turns funnier. but by all means boys, tell me how it's done.

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Fri January 18, 2019 10:21 am

tree_ wrote:Loud and fast masks poor material.

how was it loud? and it wasn't fast until the end. calm down.

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Fri January 18, 2019 12:42 pm

It wasn't. Look, I appreciate you trying to do something but I'm sorry, it just isn't loud and fast enough.

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Fri January 18, 2019 12:47 pm

Nicely done but my advice is to invest in some sound equipment, the sound really hurts it. Especially the opening scene

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Fri January 18, 2019 3:17 pm

not enough nudity, for one

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Sun January 20, 2019 12:49 am

theplatypus wrote:Nicely done but my advice is to invest in some sound equipment, the sound really hurts it. Especially the opening scene

cheers brew, any suggestions on how to deal with a windy day like that? i have a somewhat acceptable rode video mic but probably would have been better to just shoot on a less windy day if i had time.

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Sun January 20, 2019 8:21 pm

Don't set yourself up by calling yourself hilarious. Take j Seinfeld's advice. If you'd have said it sucks I might've liked it...

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Sun January 20, 2019 11:02 pm

sorry i will keep the ironic thread titles to a minimum next time to make sure you don’t miss anything.

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Mon January 21, 2019 1:03 am

why did the girl at the picnic table ask what the love interest's name is?

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Mon January 21, 2019 5:00 am

because it makes no sense.

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Tue January 22, 2019 3:09 am

WtOB? wrote:because it makes no sense.

hmm...ok

it'd probably be funnier if she said that after goofy walking guy said they were friends with the blonde
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