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| Author: | WtOB? [ Tue January 15, 2019 2:52 am ] |
| Post subject: | Hilarious Comedy Sketch |
| Author: | lennytheweedwhacker [ Wed January 16, 2019 1:15 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Hilarious Comedy Sketch |
| Author: | tree_ [ Thu January 17, 2019 5:50 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Hilarious Comedy Sketch |
Very subpar acting, camerawork, writing, etc... |
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| Author: | lennytheweedwhacker [ Thu January 17, 2019 10:31 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Hilarious Comedy Sketch |
tree_ wrote: Very subpar acting, camerawork, writing, etc... both of them? argo loves the one i posted |
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| Author: | tree_ [ Fri January 18, 2019 2:44 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Hilarious Comedy Sketch |
Both bad but first ones worse |
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| Author: | lennytheweedwhacker [ Fri January 18, 2019 2:54 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Hilarious Comedy Sketch |
tree_ wrote: Both bad but first ones worse what do we do now? |
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| Author: | tree_ [ Fri January 18, 2019 3:08 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Hilarious Comedy Sketch |
Teach comedy. Loud and fast! |
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| Author: | lennytheweedwhacker [ Fri January 18, 2019 3:17 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Hilarious Comedy Sketch |
tree_ wrote: Teach comedy. Loud and fast! i watched the first one again...so bad i'm not sure i could do better though |
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| Author: | tree_ [ Fri January 18, 2019 3:21 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Hilarious Comedy Sketch |
Loud and fast masks poor material. Look at Friends and every other shitty sitcom ever. |
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| Author: | WtOB? [ Fri January 18, 2019 10:20 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Hilarious Comedy Sketch |
i dunno, i think my skit is better than that second one. it has one joke that it retells over and over and has a predictable punchline. i find unpredictable or unexpected turns funnier. but by all means boys, tell me how it's done. |
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| Author: | WtOB? [ Fri January 18, 2019 10:21 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Hilarious Comedy Sketch |
tree_ wrote: Loud and fast masks poor material. how was it loud? and it wasn't fast until the end. calm down. |
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| Author: | tree_ [ Fri January 18, 2019 12:42 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Hilarious Comedy Sketch |
It wasn't. Look, I appreciate you trying to do something but I'm sorry, it just isn't loud and fast enough. |
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| Author: | Jorge [ Fri January 18, 2019 12:47 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Hilarious Comedy Sketch |
Nicely done but my advice is to invest in some sound equipment, the sound really hurts it. Especially the opening scene |
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| Author: | lennytheweedwhacker [ Fri January 18, 2019 3:17 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Hilarious Comedy Sketch |
not enough nudity, for one |
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| Author: | WtOB? [ Sun January 20, 2019 12:49 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Hilarious Comedy Sketch |
theplatypus wrote: Nicely done but my advice is to invest in some sound equipment, the sound really hurts it. Especially the opening scene cheers brew, any suggestions on how to deal with a windy day like that? i have a somewhat acceptable rode video mic but probably would have been better to just shoot on a less windy day if i had time. |
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| Author: | tree_ [ Sun January 20, 2019 8:21 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Hilarious Comedy Sketch |
Don't set yourself up by calling yourself hilarious. Take j Seinfeld's advice. If you'd have said it sucks I might've liked it... |
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| Author: | WtOB? [ Sun January 20, 2019 11:02 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Hilarious Comedy Sketch |
sorry i will keep the ironic thread titles to a minimum next time to make sure you don’t miss anything. |
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| Author: | lennytheweedwhacker [ Mon January 21, 2019 1:03 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Hilarious Comedy Sketch |
why did the girl at the picnic table ask what the love interest's name is? |
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| Author: | WtOB? [ Mon January 21, 2019 5:00 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Hilarious Comedy Sketch |
because it makes no sense. |
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| Author: | lennytheweedwhacker [ Tue January 22, 2019 3:09 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Hilarious Comedy Sketch |
WtOB? wrote: because it makes no sense. hmm...ok it'd probably be funnier if she said that after goofy walking guy said they were friends with the blonde |
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