Feed Rick - Bark Larf [album]

[WtOB?]

i made this one
that's also me drumming

Last edited by WtOB? on Mon May 28, 2018 2:30 am, edited 1 time in total.

[Sgt. Crackpot]

There's some pretty tight drumming there. Your kit mixing is better than PJs studio work, so there's that.

Musically it's quite good, although some of the guitar overdubs sound off key. I think this is the guitarist's attempt to offset your incredibly tone deaf vocalist. I'm not making a joke here either. Is that intentional off key singing? I'm not sure. I wasn't a fan of that. Is she channeling Courtney Love?

The most enjoyable parts were the instrumental sections in between the vocals. You guys come together well, and harmonise nicely with the violin. The bridges were also reasonably good, very Matt Cameron sounding drums in those sections.

[Sgt. Crackpot]

Oh lastly, the editing was pretty good. But the whole video made no sense to me. Maybe I'm too old to understand.

[tree_]

I agree with crackpot about tone deaf singing... I didn't have the balls to mention this before.

[Sgt. Crackpot]

Honesty is liberating, right tree_?

[tree_]

Honesty is liberating, right tree_?

I try to be honest most of the time... I just don't know if this was constructive. But, ... I used to be a horrible singer performing in front of people... and people would compliment me after... I had to figure it out on my own what I was doing wrong. This lady needs to hear why she's wrong in order to improve.

[Sgt. Crackpot]

Honesty is liberating, right tree_?

I try to be honest most of the time... I just don't know if this was constructive. But, ... I used to be a horrible singer performing in front of people... and people would compliment me after... I had to figure it out on my own what I was doing wrong. This lady needs to hear why she's wrong in order to improve.

That's a very good perspective.

[knee tunes]

You two are letting your dork flag fly way too openly and dragging it on the ground, stepping on it.

THAT is the single most coolest thing I have ever heard or saw EvEr

If MTV had that song on when when I was 13, people would be jumping off bridges

Please don't make me or anyone else for fuck's sake have to say that it sounds like that on and for all of the purposes .

thanks

and
fuck

[Sgt. Crackpot]

What's the point of feedback if it's not honest?

[tree_]

Yeah, sorry kneetunes but if the vocals are intentionally off pitch, interesting, if not she needs to know to save future embarrassment

[knee tunes]

Love this song

[surfndestroy]

I like the song. It sounds like a highly polished Courtney Barnett demo and that's not a bad thing.

[chewm]

You are wrong about the singing. It's great and fits the song perfectly.

[chewm]

Gives me a bit of Dick Diver/Twerps/Chook Race vibe. I love this.

[WtOB?]

hey gang, thanks for the comments. i totally thought this thread got ignored and i forgot i made it. she's not been singing for that long and can sometimes be pitchy due to confidence. they don't sound that bad to me but i appreciate the honest comments. and thanks for the kind words too. glad some of yez liked it. we actually have two other lead singers in other songs so maybe those who don't like Lycsh's singing would like some of those tracks.

[WtOB?]

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