General Pearl Jam discussion.
Fri December 28, 2012 5:49 pm
Wed May 18, 2016 5:29 pm
Such a good song. I love the vibe of this and Eddie's vocals.
I don't like the repetition of 'mocking me' though....feels like it should have some rhyme there
Wed May 18, 2016 5:38 pm
That would take away from the mocking aspect of the lyric if it was just a rhyme, tho.
Wed May 18, 2016 5:41 pm
I don't think that lyric sounds good. The second one can stay. The first can maybe be 'knocking me' or 'rocking me' or something.
Wed May 18, 2016 5:41 pm
socking me
Wed May 18, 2016 5:42 pm
focking me
Wed May 18, 2016 5:43 pm
mikejasond wrote:I don't think that lyric sounds good. The second one can stay. The first can maybe be 'knocking me' or 'rocking me' or something.
Then it wouldn't be mocking.
Wed May 18, 2016 5:45 pm
wease wrote:mikejasond wrote:I don't think that lyric sounds good. The second one can stay. The first can maybe be 'knocking me' or 'rocking me' or something.
Then it wouldn't be mocking.
I don't think repeating the word mocking is necessary to create a 'mocking' tone or whatever it apparently is doing
Wed May 18, 2016 7:20 pm
cocking me
Wed May 18, 2016 7:51 pm
Jesus Christ, this has become absurd.
Wed May 18, 2016 7:53 pm
I said I love the song I just had one criticism!
Wed May 18, 2016 7:54 pm
The hallways are all rocking me.
Wed May 18, 2016 7:56 pm
It doesn't have to be hallways. It can be something else. I just think the mocking line will have more punch as a rhyme.
Wed May 18, 2016 7:56 pm
The ladies they're all rocking me?
Wed May 18, 2016 7:57 pm
Fuck my brain.
Wed May 18, 2016 10:12 pm
what happened here
Wed May 18, 2016 10:15 pm
this can't be real
Wed May 18, 2016 10:18 pm
mjd
Wed May 18, 2016 10:19 pm
I just don't like the repeated 'mocking me' where it sounds like there should be a rhyme. Otherwise the song is amazing.
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