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 Post subject: Song of the Moment: Dead Man
PostPosted: Fri December 28, 2012 5:49 pm 
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Such a good song. I love the vibe of this and Eddie's vocals.

I don't like the repetition of 'mocking me' though....feels like it should have some rhyme there


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That would take away from the mocking aspect of the lyric if it was just a rhyme, tho.


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I don't think that lyric sounds good. The second one can stay. The first can maybe be 'knocking me' or 'rocking me' or something.


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mikejasond wrote:
I don't think that lyric sounds good. The second one can stay. The first can maybe be 'knocking me' or 'rocking me' or something.


Then it wouldn't be mocking.


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mikejasond wrote:
I don't think that lyric sounds good. The second one can stay. The first can maybe be 'knocking me' or 'rocking me' or something.


Then it wouldn't be mocking.


I don't think repeating the word mocking is necessary to create a 'mocking' tone or whatever it apparently is doing


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I said I love the song I just had one criticism!


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mikejasond wrote:
The first can maybe be 'knocking me' or 'rocking me' or something.

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The hallways are all rocking me.

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It doesn't have to be hallways. It can be something else. I just think the mocking line will have more punch as a rhyme.


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I just don't like the repeated 'mocking me' where it sounds like there should be a rhyme. Otherwise the song is amazing.


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